
Unfortunately, I hear a lot of people don't like to commit to a long book. I really don't understand this at all, but it is what it is. So that's what led me to chop this book in half. As an Indie I also have to wonder if this would be more profitable? Getting the reader to come back for more?



Any input on covers if greatly appreciated.
Book One;
Diana sat down to breakfast with a madman.
Eggshells, she thought. This
is what they mean when they say walking on eggshells. This edge of your seat
fear that the wrong move, the wrong word, will set him off.
She chanced a glance toward her husband and saw it. Right there
in those Robert Redford blue eyes was the mania. That touch of insanity that
crawled into their lives a few months ago was shimmering in her husband’s eyes.
Like a gleam of another dimension. A place where madness grew like wild
flowers. Or maybe weeds. Weeds that set their roots down deep in Luke’s brain
and mangled his thoughts. Tightening on his brain cells and twisting them with
fear, anger and confusion. She knew if she could get him to some kind of mental
hospital they would tell her the fruit loops in his box were doing the jig
right now, trying to escape.